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Sarah Pass

  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Blood Soaked Snow {Chapter Two}

    I really like it. Though I don't understand why the girl used her "magical" powers in front of the children. I think if she was going to use her powers ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: That Night

    That Night That night that was filled with pleasure has brought me so much pain. That minute,that moment,that hour of fun has made me feel so much regret. The love ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Secrets

    Secrets Secrets...secrets that are begging to be told. Secrets that you think about all the time. Secrets that you want to tell but are to afraid to. Secrets that gnaw ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Battlefields Eulogy

    Absolutely beautiful! My history teacher would love this! It reminds me of the poems I read for school last year about soilders, I wanted to write one ever since then ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Illisions of Control

    I love the title! I love to just make up titles so this one really grab my just flowed so well, and it was very wintery, which I love! I'm ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Dying Love

    I really liked this story! It had me hooked from almost the beginning,though at first I was kind of confused.There should be more of a development of the couple's relationship. ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Questions and Answers Re: how do I post a review

    I thought that when I pressed reply to someone's poem and wrote a comment that was a review but my status says that I have not posted any reviews, so ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi I'm Sarah

    Hi everyone, I'm Sarah, I've been writing short stories since I was 12 and poetry since about 14. I just joined a few weeks ago and I am really enjoying ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Let It Go

    Let It Go Sometimes in life when you can't fix what you've done,you've just gotta let it go. I easily forgive others but never can seem to be able to ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hide

    Hide He said "no mistakes allowed." Just one of the puppets on his string. Can't do anything unexpected because the consequences will be severe. No,I can't face him now. So ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Chained: edited

    Chained Chained to the fear,keeping you in the same spot for so long Chained to the grudges, keeping your relationships from growing Your shame has taken control of your life ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Weakness

    This is a very good poem! I loved it!

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dead Among the Monkey Bars

    That was so deep! I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work!

    Nov 12, 2009


If a story is in you, it has to come out.
— William Faulkner