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Re: Blood Soaked Snow {Chapter Two}
I really like it. Though I don't understand why the girl used her "magical" powers in front of the children. I think if she was going to use her powers ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: That Night
That Night That night that was filled with pleasure has brought me so much pain. That minute,that moment,that hour of fun has made me feel so much regret. The love ...
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Re: Secrets
Secrets Secrets...secrets that are begging to be told. Secrets that you think about all the time. Secrets that you want to tell but are to afraid to. Secrets that gnaw ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Battlefields Eulogy
Absolutely beautiful! My history teacher would love this! It reminds me of the poems I read for school last year about soilders, I wanted to write one ever since then ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Illisions of Control
I love the title! I love to just make up titles so this one really grab my just flowed so well, and it was very wintery, which I love! I'm ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Dying Love
I really liked this story! It had me hooked from almost the beginning,though at first I was kind of confused.There should be more of a development of the couple's relationship. ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: how do I post a review
I thought that when I pressed reply to someone's poem and wrote a comment that was a review but my status says that I have not posted any reviews, so ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Hi I'm Sarah
Hi everyone, I'm Sarah, I've been writing short stories since I was 12 and poetry since about 14. I just joined a few weeks ago and I am really enjoying ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Let It Go
Let It Go Sometimes in life when you can't fix what you've done,you've just gotta let it go. I easily forgive others but never can seem to be able to ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Hide
Hide He said "no mistakes allowed." Just one of the puppets on his string. Can't do anything unexpected because the consequences will be severe. No,I can't face him now. So ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Chained: edited
Chained Chained to the fear,keeping you in the same spot for so long Chained to the grudges, keeping your relationships from growing Your shame has taken control of your life ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: My Weakness
This is a very good poem! I loved it!
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Dead Among the Monkey Bars
That was so deep! I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work!
Nov 12, 2009
